Maxine, by John Lowe. (Equal 3rd) Judges' report

"Maxine", by John Lowe, shows how one man's obsession with trying to compensate for a youthful weakness affects the lives of those around him. It's the kind of novel where bad guys sometimes come out on top, and "trying to help" is likely to backfire. Rather like life, maybe? In the excerpt below, Lance is about to take a wrong turning.

 

Judges' remarks: "Good style." "Ambitious project, and the writer seems to have the experience to carry it off. "I wanted to read on." "Style reminiscent of Clive James."

Maxine, by John Lowe.

Excerpt.

It was all confused.  There were girls in miniskirts, Beatles music, the Seekers, Bob Dylan, a house full of people, a garden full of people.  Brenda had an orange dress, mini length, with dark patterned stockings.  I had been irritated by the Dane laugh, but just after one raucous outburst, Brenda giggled, said her glass needed filling, and touched my arm for support.  It was then that I thought, I was a man too, wasn't I?    It was over the orange juice and vodka that she told me her name was Weir-Smith, and I began calling her Brenda Hyphen, which she thought was hysterically funny.  I said, call me Mac, and she was happy with that.  We were edging toward the back door, and she made no objection.

 

At equal 3rd, John wins the prize package offered at PRIZE for 3rd place.

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